On last thursday I went to the hill with my aunty and my mum brother.I went around 2 park so I went hagli then north hagli.I had to sprint thru 2 park.I was so tired that my right leg was broken.I try to run the whole park but I did run the whole park I was so paft when I ran.

1. What do you already know about this?

2. What do you want to know about this?

Anaconda	is/are	can	does	would	will	might
What	What are the  anacondas going to do to people	What can anaconda do to people	What does Anaconda like to do	What would  anaconda do to people	What will anaconda do to people	What might anacondas do to a person
Where	Where is/are	Where can Anaconda hide?	Where does	What does	Who will hold a anaconda	Where
When	When is an  Anaconda going to other places	When can  anaconda eat	When does Anaconda go to sleep	When would Anaconda kill people	When will Anaconda die from a person	When might Anaconda get trapped.
Who	Who is going to hunt a anaconda	Who can be like a anaconda	Who does want to hold an anaconda	Who would want to hold are anaconda	Who will hold a anacond	Who might hold an anaconda
Why	Why does anaconda kill people	Why can Anaconda kill people	Why does Anaconda kill people	Why would Anaconda kill people	Why will Anaconda kill people	Why might Anaconda kill people
How	How is a anaconda going to catch it’s food	How can anaconda catch it’s food	How does Anaconda get’s ti’s food	How would Anaconda get’s it’s food	How will Anaconda survive if it’s getting hurt	How might Anaconda get’s it’s food

1.Write facts about character:

Maddie - 2 years old.               

2.Likes tea parties.

3.Doses Int know the toilet water is filthy .

4.Tiny.

5.Daddy- loves watching golf.

6.Busey job.

7.Ponting the hours at the weekends.

8.

9.Maddie doesn't know her own age.

10.Mum likes to cook dinner.

11.Maddie doesn't know what a flag is.

12.Maddie’s Grandma likes to watch Tv in the night.

13.Maddie’s Grandpa likes to do the washing at home.

14.Maddie does not know what a person means.

15.Maddie sleeps in the night.

16.Anty likes to buy food.

17.uncle likes to go to the shop.

18.Maddie likes to watch panda movies like KUNG FU  panda.

19.Maddie likes to play outside with her dog.

20.Maddie likes to drink milk.

21.Maddie likes to eat chicken.

22.Maddie likes to crawl around.

23.Maddie has a Brother.

24.Maddie goes to kindergarten.

25.Maddie loves dogs.

26.Maddie likes to read books.

27.Maddie likes Tv.

28.Maddie likes to go school.

29.Maddie hates scary movies

30.Maddie likes to play with her dad

31.Maddie loves to go to the movies.

32.Maddie  doesn't   Know that  dirty water is YUCK.

33.Maddie doesn't Know  how to limec.

34.Maddie loves teddy beer.

35.Maddie hates Trucks.

                

                        WATCHING

                 MADDIE...

                               

                         

             

	The herd of buffalo are walking along the river bank.
	A pride of of lions are resting in the sun
	The lions were sitting in the sun and looking for anything to eat.
	The lions were getting ready to attack the buffalo and eat it.
	The lions are trying to get the baby buffalo because the lions are
	Now the buffalo has been attacked by small baby lions.
	The lions attacked the baby buffalo
	The baby Buffalo is rescued by the herd of buffalo.

The Buffalo and the Lion. (First Draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see,          smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?   

First Draft

The animal battle

It’s a beautiful day in south Africa.  We were lying out in the nice afternoon  in the sun waiting for some buffalos to come so we can eat them up because we are hungry!. But we are going to chase the calf buffalo because it’s week at running.When the buffalos come we are all going to hunt down one of the buffaloes.when we got the baby buffalo the crocodile tried to take my family's lunch.

(The Buffalos And LIONS)

Some little and big calves were  walking down my river bank . And we were waiting and waiting  for them to come closer and closer then we will hunt one of them but we are going after the small one because It’s Week at running but we are fast at running. We are excited to go and get the calv. Yeay!!  we got the calve  let’s eat now. Guys we can’t eat if a crocodile is trying to steal our dinner. Me and my brothers are going to have a of fight  with the crocodile. We won we can eat now. I hear something stomping. I see a herd of buffalo coming to us. I think they came because we ate one of the buffalos. I am trying to run away because a herd of buffalos are chasing me. I thourt i was going to die. I  smell buffalos . When me and my brothers ate one of the buffalos it tasted like deelishis.  My brothers are get hurt from the buffalos i might go and  save them before my mum and dad come and go ruff on the buffalos. I saved my brothers.… The END.

The Buffalo and the Lion. (First Draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see,          smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?   

First Draft

The animal battle

It’s a beautiful day in south Africa.  We were lying out in the nice afternoon  in the sun waiting for some buffalos to come so we can eat them up because we are hungry!. But we are going to chase the calf buffalo because it’s week at running.When the buffalos come we are all going to hunt down one of the buffaloes.when we got the baby buffalo the crocodile tried to take my family's lunch.

(The Buffalos And LIONS)

Some little and big calves were  walking down my river bank . And we were waiting and waiting  for them to come closer and closer then we will hunt one of them but we are going after the small one because It’s Week at running but we are fast at running. We are excited to go and get the calv. Yeay!!  we got the calve  let’s eat now. Guys we can’t eat if a crocodile is trying to steal our dinner. Me and my brothers are going to have a of fight  with the crocodile. We won we can eat now. I hear something stomping. I see a herd of buffalo coming to us. I think they came because we ate one of the buffalos. I am trying to run away because a herd of buffalos are chasing me. I thourt i was going to die. I  smell buffalos . When me and my brothers ate one of the buffalos it tasted like deelishis.  My brothers are get hurt from the buffalos i might go and  save them before my mum and dad come and go ruff on the buffalos. I saved my brothers.… The END.