On last thursday I went to the hill with my aunty and my mum brother.I went around 2 park so I went hagli then north hagli.I had to sprint thru 2 park.I was so tired that my right leg was broken.I try to run the whole park but I did run the whole park I was so paft when I ran.
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ReplyDeleteWonderful job Aisa,the part that I like about your post is how you put some comers,full stop and capital letters keep it up. Some of the words don't make sense. And you might wanna check some of your words just in case It doesn't make sense. And put more detail so people can look at your blog then they will like it.Put some full stops to please. Oh ya pleas make it darker color
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