The mysteries

W.A.L.T write a fantasy

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when it includes…

• A Description of the fantasy world
• A Problem
• A description of how the problem is solved (resolution)
• The journey back to the real world
• A description about how the character feels

Fantasy world

I woke up in this house then I heard steps coming towards me. I looked everywhere around the house too see where the steps are going. I found a light then I turned it on when I turned it on two spooky men were right in front of me. I screamed really bad that I had a headache. What was the scary thing was is that the two spooky men had blood coming down from there head. The two spooky men were holding a axe. I was afraid that they would hurt me.

The problem was that I tried to go to sleep because I was so so scared. I kept on trying to tell the two spooky men (who are you?. One of them tried to speak but they couldn’t. They both walked off. When they went I followed them from behind.

When I followed the spooky men they both fell into this temple then I went with them is well. I saw the two spooky men they were walking too this haunted house. By accident I screamed because there were dead bodies everywhere. When I screamed the two spooky men looked at me then I found a gun on the ground. I picked it up well the two spooky men were running at me. My best friend Jack was in a car then he saw me in this spooky world I was in. He picked me up from the spooky world. The problem was that the spooky men were chasing me too the car. I got the gun and shot both of them on the head. One of them were still alive but I got into the car. Jack ran over the spooky guy then me and Jack got too safety. I said to myself from all that stuff I went through was like a nightmare to me. I am now finally in my own world.

For this writing I feel good for getting all this work finished.