The present

W.A.L.T: Write a narrative.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.

THE PRESENT

Hello my name is  Roman I was playing on my Xbox game, then my mum came and told me that she had a present for me. The present was a little dog. The dog was in a box and it came out barking at me. The dog had only 4 legs. The dog was fluffy and it had a black nose. Wait the dog didn’t have 4 legs it only had 3 legs. I threw the dog to the ground because I just realized that it had only one leg missing. In my head I was saying to myself that I don’t like dogs that has dogs that has three legs. When I threw the dog to the ground the dog looked at a red ball and went and got it, then the dog came to me with the ball.

The dog felt excited to play with me with the ball outside. So the dog asked me but I said no. The dog kept on trying to ask me if I could play with him outside with the ball but I said no get lost! The dog tried to get me to play with him but I stilled Ignored him. I continued  Then the little dog started to act a bit sad which made me feel sorry. So I went playing around with the dog and being silly. so I turned off my Xbox and played outside with my little dog.

I was having so fun with the little dog that it was my favorite present. What I did to play was that I had to throw a ball well the dog go’s and get it. It was the best day ever. Me and and the dog went inside like about 5.30 in the afternoon. Me and the dog watched movies all night long. Me and the dog are best best best friends.  And what was so cool was that me and the dog had a missing leg. What I said to the dog was that I would never throw you to the ground again!