The mysteries

W.A.L.T write a fantasy

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when it includes…

• A Description of the fantasy world
• A Problem
• A description of how the problem is solved (resolution)
• The journey back to the real world
• A description about how the character feels

Fantasy world

I woke up in this house then I heard steps coming towards me. I looked everywhere around the house too see where the steps are going. I found a light then I turned it on when I turned it on two spooky men were right in front of me. I screamed really bad that I had a headache. What was the scary thing was is that the two spooky men had blood coming down from there head. The two spooky men were holding a axe. I was afraid that they would hurt me.

The problem was that I tried to go to sleep because I was so so scared. I kept on trying to tell the two spooky men (who are you?. One of them tried to speak but they couldn’t. They both walked off. When they went I followed them from behind.

When I followed the spooky men they both fell into this temple then I went with them is well. I saw the two spooky men they were walking too this haunted house. By accident I screamed because there were dead bodies everywhere. When I screamed the two spooky men looked at me then I found a gun on the ground. I picked it up well the two spooky men were running at me. My best friend Jack was in a car then he saw me in this spooky world I was in. He picked me up from the spooky world. The problem was that the spooky men were chasing me too the car. I got the gun and shot both of them on the head. One of them were still alive but I got into the car. Jack ran over the spooky guy then me and Jack got too safety. I said to myself from all that stuff I went through was like a nightmare to me. I am now finally in my own world.

For this writing I feel good for getting all this work finished.

The proformence

Yesterday at school my class has been preforming a dance. In our class room there are year 4's,year 5's and year 6's. The year  4's year 5's  have been learning a Samoan sa'sa. They have created some of there own moves. The Sa'sa group has been proud of there selfs for getting this dance done. They have also been trying there best to get this dance finished. Down here is some photo's of the Sa'Sa.

The year six girls have been learning a dance with Ti Rakau sticks. It has took days to get this dance finished for the girls. They have tried there best to finished this dance. The girls feel really impress for getting there dance finished. Down here there are some pictures of the girls dancing with there ti Rakau sticks. For the girls there is a leader. The boys are standing at the back of the girls well they do there dance.

The year 6 boys have been  learning a super haka. This haka is for the people that died in the 2011 earthquake. The boys have been trying there best to get this haka done. The super haka is a Maori haka. The haka that the boys done was pretty loud. The boys feel good for getting this haka completed. I also felt good for getting the haka finished. So down here there some very good photo's of the boys haka.

My maths D.L.O

W.A.L.T: Subtracting two digit numbers by first taking away the ones and then the tens.

This year I have been learning about taking away the tens and then the ones. This video could help you with your take away's. This video shows you how to answer a question. I am so proud of myself for getting this video finished. I feel good and excited to show you this video. Also this video is important for you to watch so you could know all of your take away's. You should try this at home. Also this video was created on Friday the 7th of April 2017.