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Friday, October 28, 2016

Milan's birthday party...

This is my story about my brother's birthday







Made by Aisa Mataese.

Last Saturday we had my brother's birthday. Me, Aunty Tala, Desire and my mum had to set all the things up for the birthday. Desire did the balloon and my Aunty Tala did all the cooking while me and my mum pumped up all the other stuff. My mum had to pump up a Star War's shield and a Star War's stick. We all went inside to open my brother's presents. My brother's favourite toys are Star Wars so mostly everyone got Star Wars for his presents. What me and my mum got was a Star War's plane and a Star War's laptop. He loved his laptop that he bought a Star War's game and played on it the whole day. After that we went swimming in the pool I pumped up. Me, Milan, Lata and Desire were so lucky that day because we went swimming then ate lunch. Secondly, we came back out to swim, then after that we went to Timezone. Then finally we went home with our goody bags. But my mum decided to stay longer so we went home at quarter past 11.  Since we stayed longer we put on loud music then we all danced and it was like a party that day. After all of that me, mum, Tala, Milan, Lata and Desire felt INCREDIBLE!!! Especially Milan because it was his birthday, he felt so happy. Me, mum, Tala, Lata and Desire felt good because Milan had a very, very good time.
Milan did a speech. The speech was that this was Milan's best birthday ever. Me, mum and Desire had to go home, that was also because it was too late. Before we went home Milan had rubbish in his hand and he threw it in the rubbish from 5 or 3 metres away and got it in the rubbish. Then after he got it in, all of us were like OOOOOHHHHHH!!!!!!!.


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