Spencer park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Spencer park

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

Last Friday Ako Ngatahi went to Spencer park. Then when we got to Spencer we lined up in a line. We all had a numbers on our hand. So every person that had number 1,2,,3,4,5 or 6. If I had number 2 then I have to be in number 2’s group. What activity we did at Spencer park was walking to the beach, playing on the playground and walking around the park.

What my group started on was walking down the beach. What we had to at the beach was  that we had to find special. Then after we walked dowed the beach my group went to the playground. What I did on the playground was that I played on the flying fox. The people I played with was ranit, Jullien,Vann,Nature and Axle. Then secondly my group got to go on a very long walk. The walk was like miles away from the place we were at. I was walking beside a friend of mine. His name was Ranit. I was proud of myself and Ranit because we didn't stop when we were walking. When we walked me and Ranit were very tired. After we walked we walked back to the park.

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When me and my group got back to the park we got to have free time. Me, Nature, Vann, Jullien and Mikayla played basketball. There was a person that is very good at basketball. Well we were playing me and Nature got a 3 pointer. Me and Nature and our team had a good defence. The team was Hornby Primary school vs South hornby school. Hornby Primary school was leading by 16 points. A guy in south hornby school was too good and that person had lots and lots of skills. The guys name was Jurl. Jurl was going for a 3 pointer but team hornby primary school had to go back there school. Me, Nature, Lasa and mikayla had to go back in Nature's car back to hornby primary school. We all got to have fruit. Lasa had ate and i ate one palm and 1 apple and Mikayla ate like 5 or 7 palms.