I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Well done Aisa. You have made a good plan for your narrative story. I like the detail of the description of the chimp. How will your mindmup help you write your story? Why did the Space Chimp get sent to space for 65 years?
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Well done Aisa. You have made a good plan for your narrative story. I like the detail of the description of the chimp. How will your mindmup help you write your story? Why did the Space Chimp get sent to space for 65 years?
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