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Friday, July 29, 2016

The Chimp Lands On Earth

This is my planning of a writing piece that I will make called "The Chimp Lands On Earth."I hope you like my planning.

1 comment:

  1. Well done Aisa. You have made a good plan for your narrative story. I like the detail of the description of the chimp. How will your mindmup help you write your story? Why did the Space Chimp get sent to space for 65 years?

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