My learning goals

    Today I am going to be showing my parents this learning goal slide that I have been working on and finding the right evidence for my parent interveiws.                                                 

                                                                                                                                                

Title   Aisa's  blend all about it

Smooth

Smile

Smell

Smoke

Smack

Smiled

Thought

Throw

The

There

Their

They

They’re

Twin

Two

Twas

Tweet

Twat

Twelve

Twenty

Small

Smooth

Smile

Smell

Smoke

Smack

Smiled

Climb

Cliff

Clips

Clothe

Clothes

Clothing

Cleaver

Bro

Brother

Bra

Bring

Brought

Bread

Brick

       Term 2 Week 3

                       2016

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see,          smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?   

First Draft

In 2014 It was beautiful day in South Africa.  We were lying out in the nice afternoon sun waiting for some buffalos to come, so we can eat them because we are hungry. We are so hungry but we might go and eat the precious  buffalo because the precious buffalo is slow at running but we are first atr running

                                                                

SECOND

                                                         DRAFT

In 2015 Some little and big calves were  walking down my river bank.  They are staring at me and my 5 boys. We were excited to go and get the calve because we are HUNGRY. I am ready to get the calve.

We attacked the buffalo and tackled the calf into the water.  We have the calve but we will eat it beside my river. I see my river moving fast and it’s getting closer and closer.  SNAP!!!  A crocodile snapped my leg . Me and the crocodile  were having a tiger war over the calf  because we are all hungry.But it is my dinner and my 5 boys dinner.  We  dragged the calf out of the water.

Then we started to hear something stomping. Then we saw a herd of buffalo running towards us. I think they came because we hunted one of their precious buffalo.  The buffalos were bumping into me then they started to run at me with there  horns coming threw me.

I am trying to run away because a herd of buffalos are chasing me UHHHHHH!!!.

I thought I was going to die. I smell buffalos. When me and my brothers ate one of the buffalos it tasted like meat.  My brothers are getting hurt from the buffalos I might go and save them before they die. The buffalo were seriously hurting my brothers but I save them because i don’t want them to die.

In 2016 me and my brothers were ok from getting hurt by a herd of buffalos in 2015